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"Hey."

"Save it."

"I didn't say anything."

"Good. Keep it that way."

A sigh.

"He's sorry, you know. For what he did."

I stayed silent.

"Can't you at least talk to him?"

I gave out a short, sharp bark of laughter. It came out sounding feral.

"You're lucky I'm talking to you!"

"Me? What did I do?"

"Nothing. That's the point."

"I tried to stop him."

Our eyes met. "Tried isn't good enough," I said shortly.

"Can't you just-"

"Can't I just? Can't I just what? Forgive him? Because I won't. And I never will."

I laughed. "He's not even brave enough to try to talk to me face to face! Instead, he sends you! A diplomat! An envoy!"

"Sending in the cavalry while he sits and watches from the barracks!" I spat.

"Or maybe, instead of the cavalry, I'm a third party. Trying to end the conflict."

I stared at that face. That mouth, twisting and turning words to suit its needs. Those eyes, falsely trustworthy.

"He said I was worse than a dog. A savage. A wild animal," I stated flatly.

"He didn't mean it. He was angry."

"Of course you'd say that."

"He didn't m-"

"But he said it. He said it. Doesn't matter about his state of mind."

"Wild animal, am I?" I whispered. "Savage? Be careful what you wish for. Be very, VERY careful what you wish for."
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Got no idea what this is. Just popped into my head. >.<
A bit cliched, I thought. =P
Never done a dialogue thing before.

Also submitted to #InspireTheUninspired for their prompt on 'fiction that consists only of dialogue.' =P
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~crystelclear1104 Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is oddly like my Tangled dialogue. :P
But this is awesome! How did I not see this earlier?? >.<
Love this! :D
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~Avix215 Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thanks! :)
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~Cerise-XIII Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It confused me a bit, the break of the lines did. But I like it. It could be about any number of things, so it's good in that it can engage several kinds of people at the same time. I know I can relate to it on more than one level.

I like it. It's quite good to be a first C:
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~Avix215 Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :D
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I like this.
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~Avix215 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :)
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I like it :)
Thou I can relate to some of the dialogue.... *sigh*
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~Avix215 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
Ah. Sorry to hear that. :/
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:iconanubisgirl13:
Nah, Its fine....Im used to it
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~Avix215 Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Alright then...
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